The experience of fatigue and its self-mangement among haemodialysis patients

What do I need from the writer?
Basically, I am looking for someone who can guide and help me in writing up the following:
1. I need help in build-in and writing up the discussion chapter.
The supervisory team want me to collapse the findings chapter (see the uploaded file:1) and discuss only the main key points from it in the discussion chapter. The key points should highlight the key messages that influenced fatigue and fatigue management and what can be done to improve fatigue within the study context and internationally. I wrote some thoughts on the key points, and my supervisors commented on them (see the attached file 2), to give the writer a sense of what is really needed, however, the draft is not well structured and need a better way of structure and the writing style should be based on the supervisors’ comment.
In this order, the writer should check the findings chapter and modify the written draft of the key points that I made for the discussion chapter (see the attached file 2), which the supervisors commented on it in order to make the key points and the structure of the discussion chapter clear. The writer can change the structure of the key points based on his/her experience and maybe display them also in a table to provide a clear story. Once the writer completes this step, I will go through it and then share it with the supervisors to see their feedback and comments and make sure we are on the right track.
Later on, I am going to place another order with the same writer to check the comments and plans on how to write the complete discussion chapter. At this stage, I am going to divide the work into two or three parts in order to work alongside with the writer and my supervisory team and make sure they are satisfied with the work. Also in this stage, I am going to provide the included literature in my literature review chapter so the writer can use it and integrated in the discussion chapter

In summary, the writer will start writing the 1st part of the discussion, share it with me to comment on it before I email it to the supervisors. After that, I email it to the supervisory team and once I get the feedback from them, then I will modify their comments and place another order with the modified document to be checked and to start step 2 and so on. I hope the process is clear. If there are any questions, please let me know and note I need to be in touch with the writer.