SPORTS SUBJECT AREA*
Description
*THIS IS A SPORTS SUBJECT AREA* The main aim of this study is to examine if there is a difference in Fundamental Movement Skills (FMS), health status and physical activity in relation to ethnicity.
The ‘Diss Data Sheet’ has all the students ethnicity, gender and anthropometric data. (that is completed no need to change)
The ‘Underhill 1-2’ data, has the Physical activity and Fundamental movement skills data . However this data is in its original format. For part of your analysis you need to marry up the students numbers indicated on the left hand side to the same number on the ‘Diss Data Sheet’
You will find that some students do not have some data sets etc but this happens in research, so you must make sure that you find all the correct data.
I would recommend create a new excel sheet and include all the relevant information that you wish to analyse.
Thank you for the paper. However, you have made no relevant changes. You literally paraphrased the first chapters of the paper, but the main issue of Results and Discussion has not been revised. Moreover, you have deleted much information. Why have you done so? The paper now doesn’t meet the word count. Evidently, you haven’t understood revision comment. Please, re-read it:
“Please work in the attached ‘704753_for_the_new_writer’ file and address the customer’s revision comments:
– Again, results present no valuable information. You simply inserted some descriptive information that can be easily seen in the tables. What do these data mean in the context of the research questions and objectives? Why the distribution of participants based on gender and ethnicity is relevant (“The largest percentage of the children (46%) were White” – so what? “Overall, the mean height, mass, and body fat percentage of the children who took part in the study were 124±28.35 cm, 73.95±28.35 lb, and 21.1±19.16%, respectively. Other key average data of the participants were the waist-to-hip ratio (0.90±0.04) and the body mass index, which was 18.34±3.97” – so?)? What do the results from the tests show? None of these questions was answered.
– Therefore, the discussion and conclusion should be adjusted if not rewritten anew since during the rewriting of the results you may found out some new issues.
– Not all of the comments were followed – please, find attached the file “704753_to address” and cover the comments in yellow.”
Your main areas of focus are Results, Discussion and Conclusion. There is no need to paraphrase the paper. You need to address only these specific comments along with those that are in yellow. Don’t delete any information if it is not required by professor’s comments. The final paper must be 4,000 words minimum.