Editing paper on Jean Tinguely’s “Hommage to New York”

I need someone that will deliver a proofread and excellently written paper, that can do a better job in the bibliography and can follow the instructions/comments given. I need someone that will use English google scholar references in the bibliography, I won’t allow websites and so on.

The first few sentences (at least) are clearly vague paraphrases from a source that you do not mention [www.ideelart.com/magazine/jean-tinguely]

Unless I am mistaken indeed: “There is no one-size-fits-all approach to how we interact with machines” is a paraphrase of ““We each have our own unique relationship with machines”; “Machines are viewed as a source of discomfort by some individuals, who appreciate the efficient and valuable services they give” is a reformulation of “Some of us relate to machines with gratitude, joyfully relying on them for their efficient, utilitarian services” and “We only use them when we don’t have any other options at the time” says the same thing as “others of us use them only begrudgingly when there’s no other option.” Yet, while your inspiration is clear you do not provide its source (neither in a footnote or in bibliography).

Numerous passages do not make sense: for instance, “Tinguely developed a body of work that includes works of art that spawned new works of art and works of art” or “The main contributions were; Immobility does not exist, be static — with movement — and live in a time and don’t be misled by outdated concepts like “hours,” “seconds,” and “minutes.” Rather, accept the notion that time is a flexible construct.” Overall, the essay lack coherence: At one point the performance “drew over a thousand people” at another “a small number of guests gathered on the Museum of Modern Art; the piece is indifferently interpreted as “symbolically depict[ing] the city’s [New York] dynamic energy” and as “an allusion to Europe’s dark history” in the same sentence.

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