Current Relevance of Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury

Could you simply remove the “Annotated Bibliography” section from your draft and lengthen the paper to the 2250 of the order?

In his personal mind, Bradbury made an accurate prediction that the contemporary society would relate to in numerous aspects. He was making a conceptual response to the atrocities that took place during the world wars, where people showed to be more accelerated by their personal interests rather than that of the broader society. In his presentations, the protagonist character Guy Montag was depicted as the fireman who sought to deal with the books by burning them. He similarly indicated that the large flat screen televisions would take the highest portion of the people’s thinking, which was demonstrated by having Leonard Mead arrested for walking in the streets, yet owning no television.
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Teli, Maurizio, Francesco Pisanu, and David Hakken. “The internet as a library-of-people: For a cyberethnography of online groups.” Forum Qualitative Sozialforschung/Forum: Qualitative Social Research. Vol. 8. No. 3. 2007.
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The triad scholars used an analytical approach to explicating the traversed manner in which technology and internet have influenced the way things are done in the society. In fact, it is a confirmation of Bradbury’s position that the society would be obsessed with the provisions of technology than their personal lives. In this precept, the trio indicates that cyberethnography has taken a bigger toll on the youths as well as other people who belong to the digital groups, more cemented on their digital platforms more than any other thing. Therefore, it is imperatively right that technology is rapidly growing, and definitely that it is a veracity of its value that technology is yet to grow quickly, more so to shape the world thinking.
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Patai, Daphne. “Ray Bradbury and the assault on free thought.” Society 50.1 (2013): 41-
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Those sections are what I am referring to. You have it under “Annotated Bibliography” but that’s not a correct format for that either.

I just read through the research paper I ordered and I’m not very pleased. The formatting isn’t good, I’m not sure why there are full citations scattered through the paper and the in-text citations don’t look correct either.
The body of the paper is supposed to be 9 pages but really it is about 7 and a half because the 9th page on my order is actually works cited page.
I need to have these revisions accomplished by Friday the 7th.