Academic Essay

The descriptions are very good and I like how much information there is but can you structure it like an academic essay? You have enough information to make a concrete thesis. There’s no clear thesis in the introduction or the conclusion. There should be 3 body paragraphs representing 3 theories of the monster’s origins with evidence to support the claims. You took out the outside sources, but can you describe the monster in your own perspective? And connect it’s relations to the theories of the other authors?

Here are the different theories you can use if you don’t know them:

Mary Shelly: creates her monster by her connections to death, her trip to Geneva, and her anxieties about recent events.

King: we are mentally ill and need the psychic relief. He states 4 reasons why we watch horror movies; to prove that we can, to re-establish a feeling of normality, to enjoy other’s suffering, and to experience immoral emotions.

del Toro and Hogan: vampires are the romantic hero and the undead monster. We want to be like them, having eternal youth and sexiness.

Klosterman: zombies are simple, but they represent modern life and its problems that keep on coming. There’s a fear of contagian, becoming mindless.

Brothers: Godzilla originates from the aftermath of Hiroshima and Nagasaki. It’s an incarnation of radiation, dealing with disaster in isolation (Japan had no allies) and a feeling of helplessness, and serving as a warning for future generation (grappling with anxiety about future nuclear attacks).

Loughrey: slender has vague and contradicting details like its appearance and victims. It’s relatable: creepy woods near your neighborhood, the young audience can believe in the monster. There are folktale traditions told- woods as dangerous, kidnapped children incidents.

28 Jan 2020 23:04

Hello, I like where you’re going with this academic essay, but I feel like this essay doesn’t follow the guidelines my professor gave to me. There are also sources I don’t recognize. You don’t need to have exactly 6 sources, less of fine. Can you make more connections to the sources and support your claims for the origins of the monster? Maybe describe the monster in your own image that gives you fear instead of from that outside source. And should be a 5 paragraph essay that includes introduction, 3 body paragraphs, and conclusion. Two body paragraphs are ok if it’s long enough. Thank you for writing anyway.

27 Jan 2020 21:21

This is an academic essay where I have to write about one personal monster and make connections to the stories from Monsters. The monster can be anything but it has to be concrete so I can describe it, like the boogeyman or something.

These are the page numbers and authors. I also attached pictures of the stories at this imgur link: https://imgur.com/gallery/JOEEdYm

Monsters by Andrew J. Hoffman (2nd Edition):

Stephen King, Why We Crave Horror Movies, pgs.16-18;
Mary Shelley, from Frankenstein: The Modern Prometheus, pgs. 20-21;
Susan Tyler Hitchcock, Conception, pgs. 23-33;
Guillermo del Toro and Chuck Hogan, Why Vampires Never Die, pgs. 35-37;
Chuck Klosterman, My Zombie, Myself: Why Modern Life Feels Rather Undead, pgs. 39-43;
Peter H. Brothers, Japan’s Nuclear Nightmare: How the Bomb Became a Beast Called Godzilla, pgs. 45-53;
Clarisse Loughrey, Slender Man: A Myth of the Digital Age, pgs. 55-57

I also have my assignment handout and syllabus attached. And I put examples of my other essays and works, if that would be useful.

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