[Revision] Case Study: Kaitie
DescriptionPlease adhere to the grading rubric attached, answer each question asked, don\’t use 1st person and don\’t forget to add the CONCLUSION paragraph. Lastly, make sure to use citations frequently. Citations should be used every 2-3 sentences.
Latest revision comment[January 25, 2021 03:27] Some issues are still present:
–reduce the wordcount to be within the limit
–add introduction – ‘concise introduction (ending in a solid thesis statement), complete paragraphs, and a final conclusion.’ – conclusion should cover all the info presented
–Part 4 -specifically outline each of the key ethical considerations that will support the necessary steps in the assessment and intervention process – you do not identify any as such, only give an example
–include a discussion to address any potential legal, cultural and social validity issues
–recent comments from the client – ‘2. The methodology used needs to explained more detailed. 4. Have on big main research question and the others can be sub questions, but make sure the research question are answered directly and in a detailed manner.; Also write more about how the methodology is a theoretical research, add scholarly text regarding that.’
–The paper must be structured as per template. We are waiting for it from the customer, so please use it as soon as you receive it.
–proofread the paper, there are many grammar mistakes and unclear sentences (e.g. The laws should be followed when handling the children and anything other human beings’ lives as provided for in both the constitutions and the oath sworn by the professions when registered; In this way, you can always match their pace as well, and it will give you a good ground for doing your job as a professional by creating a good rapport. – do not use personal pronouns; In conclusion, the program adopted to help Kaitie improve her situation-Applied Behavioral Analysis- is an evidence-based approach that will see her gaining a lot if adequately integrated with naturalistic teaching – gaining what? ‘a lot’ – non academic; According to the APA’s Science directorate, they recommend some of the activities such as being conscious of multiple roles, following informed consent rules, respecting the clients’ privacy and confidentiality – being conscious is an activity?; . If it is lack of cooperation from parents then solution should be reached by looking at some of the alternatives like changing on what they want or allowing them to adopt what you want. If co-experts are the problem then you should have alternative supply to substitute them if they cannot change ; When the problem is with the child then consult her parents so that a proper solution can be made…)
–reduce the wordcount to be within the limit
–add introduction – ‘concise introduction (ending in a solid thesis statement), complete paragraphs, and a final conclusion.’ – conclusion should cover all the info presented
–Part 4 -specifically outline each of the key ethical considerations that will support the necessary steps in the assessment and intervention process – you do not identify any as such, only give an example
–include a discussion to address any potential legal, cultural and social validity issues
–recent comments from the client – ‘2. The methodology used needs to explained more detailed. 4. Have on big main research question and the others can be sub questions, but make sure the research question are answered directly and in a detailed manner.; Also write more about how the methodology is a theoretical research, add scholarly text regarding that.’
–The paper must be structured as per template. We are waiting for it from the customer, so please use it as soon as you receive it.
–proofread the paper, there are many grammar mistakes and unclear sentences (e.g. The laws should be followed when handling the children and anything other human beings’ lives as provided for in both the constitutions and the oath sworn by the professions when registered; In this way, you can always match their pace as well, and it will give you a good ground for doing your job as a professional by creating a good rapport. – do not use personal pronouns; In conclusion, the program adopted to help Kaitie improve her situation-Applied Behavioral Analysis- is an evidence-based approach that will see her gaining a lot if adequately integrated with naturalistic teaching – gaining what? ‘a lot’ – non academic; According to the APA’s Science directorate, they recommend some of the activities such as being conscious of multiple roles, following informed consent rules, respecting the clients’ privacy and confidentiality – being conscious is an activity?; . If it is lack of cooperation from parents then solution should be reached by looking at some of the alternatives like changing on what they want or allowing them to adopt what you want. If co-experts are the problem then you should have alternative supply to substitute them if they cannot change ; When the problem is with the child then consult her parents so that a proper solution can be made…)
